अपने आस-पास जो महसूस करती हूँ.....शब्दो में उन्हे बाँध देती हूँ....मुझे लिखने की सारी प्रेणना, मेरे मित्र नितिन से मिलती है....
शुक्रिया नितिन, तुम मेरे साथ हो....
परिचय हुआ मात्र धडकनों की चहातो का पर स्पर्श जैसे अपना ज़िन्दगी से हो गया....
"jindgee se pechaan subkee ho, ye jruree to nahee, kyee btayen reh jateen hai dharkno mey bhee ankhee, khusnaseeb ho tum e dost ke tumne sub kuch paa liya.... vernaa khushyeeno se ho subkaa vasstaa , ye jruree to nahee"
Hi, thanks for visiting my blog and appreciating it. i too liked ur potery , well written. keep it up
परिचय हुआ मात्र धडकनों की चहातो का पर स्पर्श जैसे अपना ज़िन्दगी से हो गया....
"jindgee se pechaan subkee ho, ye jruree to nahee, kyee btayen reh jateen hai dharkno mey bhee ankhee, khusnaseeb ho tum e dost ke tumne sub kuch paa liya.... vernaa khushyeeno se ho subkaa vasstaa , ye jruree to nahee"
Hi, thanks for visiting my blog and appreciating it. i too liked ur potery , well written. keep it up.
Well written Kirti ji Very well written. Believe me ther3e are very few whose poetry can match yours in compactness and impact it leaves on readers. What is more imprtant is that you must keep this spirit of optimism up in all your incoming poems. I am happy to note change of mood reflected in your poems. Keep it up
aap ki likhi kavitayein zindagi ko kafi karib se dekhne ki koshish karti hain, aap ki kayi kaivtao ko padhne ke baad laga ki aap ki kalam zindagi ko panno pe utarna chahti hai, achha prayas hai sunder kavitayen hain
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परिचय हुआ मात्र
धडकनों की चहातो का
पर स्पर्श जैसे अपना
ज़िन्दगी से हो गया....
"jindgee se pechaan subkee ho, ye jruree to nahee,
kyee btayen reh jateen hai dharkno mey bhee ankhee,
khusnaseeb ho tum e dost ke tumne sub kuch paa liya....
vernaa khushyeeno se ho subkaa vasstaa , ye jruree to nahee"
Hi, thanks for visiting my blog and appreciating it. i too liked ur potery , well written. keep it up
परिचय हुआ मात्र
धडकनों की चहातो का
पर स्पर्श जैसे अपना
ज़िन्दगी से हो गया....
"jindgee se pechaan subkee ho, ye jruree to nahee,
kyee btayen reh jateen hai dharkno mey bhee ankhee,
khusnaseeb ho tum e dost ke tumne sub kuch paa liya....
vernaa khushyeeno se ho subkaa vasstaa , ye jruree to nahee"
Hi, thanks for visiting my blog and appreciating it. i too liked ur potery , well written. keep it up.
very nice
Well written Kirti ji Very well written. Believe me ther3e are very few whose poetry can match yours in compactness and impact it leaves on readers.
What is more imprtant is that you must keep this spirit of optimism up in all your incoming poems. I am happy to note change of mood reflected in your poems. Keep it up
aap ki likhi kavitayein zindagi ko kafi karib se dekhne ki koshish karti hain,
aap ki kayi kaivtao ko padhne ke baad laga ki aap ki kalam zindagi ko panno pe utarna chahti hai, achha prayas hai
sunder kavitayen hain
BAHUT KHOOB
bahut hi khubsurat,jeevan se bharpur.
बहुत ही लाजवाब लिखा है आपने। आपकी जितनी भी तारीफ की जाए कम है.......
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